village morning

the lean coconut trees stand lined up
against the red eastern sky at dawn
the village is yet to meet the new day
the river softly glitters under sun
bamboo groves and trees loud with bird chirp!

Sharmishtha basu
8.4.13

Envelope Quintet
Rhyme Scheme a. b. b. b. a. or
a, b, c, b, a
Iambic Pentameter or 10 syllables suggested

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