The Thursday Post Critiques 25.7.13

PIC BLANK 4 BUKLYT gatj

Every writer should try to study people around as much as they can, to give more life to their characters.
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Baby blue

He held her hand warmly and kissed it, she leaned her head on his shoulder. One look into those baby blue eyes and a woman was supposed to swoon! There was so much innocence in his eyes.

Another mutilated body was discovered in a park.

“Why do these women flitter around these parks at dead of night? None of these women are fluttery type!” the inspector mused aloud.

“One look in those baby blue eyes and they think you are an angel…” the voice in his head chuckled. “They don’t even know that devil too is strikingly handsome!”

He pouted.

Word Count 100 words

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